This isn’t just a feedback session: it’s a revision relaunch.
☁︎ Detailed feedback on up to 20,000 words, delivered in two parts
→ 10,000 words each month (so you can digest and implement gradually)
→ You’ll receive margin comments and big-picture notes focused on story engine, character dynamics, world-building, structure, and what’s actually working
☁︎ 3 x 60-minute Zoom sessions
→ Call 1: Align on your goals + review first 10k
→ Call 2: Deep dive into the next 10k + discuss patterns and gaps
→ Call 3: Co-create your personalized revision roadmap: what to change, what to keep, and how to approach your next draft with clarity
☁︎ Your Personalized Roadmap
→ Think of it as your DIY revision toolkit: clear next steps, recommended strategies, timeline guidance, and emotional support tips
☁︎ Email support between calls
→ Quick check-ins, accountability nudges, and space to ask questions as you process